5 / 10
I couldn't remember why I'd stopped reading this one a while back, so I picked it up again. Note to self for future: the story is an interesting divergence-style fanfic with a good building beginning, but it seems to have been abandoned by the author before getting to the meat of the story.
Irrelevant to the story, but if you do check it out: don't read the "author notes" at the end of each chapter. Personally, at least, I thought a good chunk of them devolved into condescending blurbs of "oh man, I put this subtle thing in my writing, but I bet none of you noticed" with reference to blatantly obvious plotlines.Link.